Penguins Arena texts
by Canon · in General Discussion · 07/31/2007 (3:14 am) · 2 replies
Hello,
We are working on the demo of Penguins Arena for the Intel contest. All is going well, but our english language is really crapy when it comes to marketing.
We need help to be sure the following text is clean, pro, and without spelling errors :p
[I1] The Legend tells us that, when the world went crazy ...
[I2] ... the penguins were hardest hit by global warming and pollution ...
[I3] no more ice to live, no more fishes to eat.
[I4] Then Sedna, the Penguins Goddess, suddenly appeared from Ancient Times.
[I5] She gathered everyone of them and said :
[I6] Penguins, facing this chaos, only one tribe could remain. That's the price of our survival.
[I7] The Penguins understood Sedna and decided to obey. But which tribe will be the One ? They all together thought about the way to chose and they finally found it...
[H1] You're part of a penguins team, and your goal is to eject other penguins from the iceberg.
[H2] If you're ejected, then you will be reincarnated in one of your team member ... if there remains one.
[D1] - unlock the 5 bonus
[D2] - disable all demo warnings
[D3] - choose a name for your penguin
[D4] - unlimited snowballs when you're a ghost
[D5] - special goodies
[D6] - and the joy to help independent game developers!
Thank you!
Christophe
www.frogames.net
www.frogames.com
We are working on the demo of Penguins Arena for the Intel contest. All is going well, but our english language is really crapy when it comes to marketing.
We need help to be sure the following text is clean, pro, and without spelling errors :p
[I1] The Legend tells us that, when the world went crazy ...
[I2] ... the penguins were hardest hit by global warming and pollution ...
[I3] no more ice to live, no more fishes to eat.
[I4] Then Sedna, the Penguins Goddess, suddenly appeared from Ancient Times.
[I5] She gathered everyone of them and said :
[I6] Penguins, facing this chaos, only one tribe could remain. That's the price of our survival.
[I7] The Penguins understood Sedna and decided to obey. But which tribe will be the One ? They all together thought about the way to chose and they finally found it...
[H1] You're part of a penguins team, and your goal is to eject other penguins from the iceberg.
[H2] If you're ejected, then you will be reincarnated in one of your team member ... if there remains one.
[D1] - unlock the 5 bonus
[D2] - disable all demo warnings
[D3] - choose a name for your penguin
[D4] - unlimited snowballs when you're a ghost
[D5] - special goodies
[D6] - and the joy to help independent game developers!
Thank you!
Christophe
www.frogames.net
www.frogames.com
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But maybe there are some people here who can do it for free ;)