New Frogames Website ... soon
by Canon · 01/26/2006 (8:34 am) · 10 comments
The new Frogames Website will be releazed very soon.
We are not very familiar with commercial english, so we need some comments about spelling and grammar, especially for the 'services' page.
Thank you!
Christophe
www.frogames.net
We are not very familiar with commercial english, so we need some comments about spelling and grammar, especially for the 'services' page.
Thank you!
Christophe
www.frogames.net
About the author
#2
01/26/2006 (9:47 am)
Congrats Canon! looking good. 
#3
You have a buyer that awaits. :)
Good luck
01/26/2006 (10:02 am)
Very cool. I love your art style and cant wait until some of your art packs are out for purchase.You have a buyer that awaits. :)
Good luck
#4
*****
Frogames gives you resources to speed up the production of your game. We create affordable content packs as well as provide 2-d and 3-d art creation. Frogames main focus is supporting Indie game developers.
We are well-known to be skilled, reactive, professional, with front-line development experience, providing an excellent quality-price ratio.
If you want to work with us or need a quote, please contact us.
Characters
Characters will be realized, optimized and animated with care.
Frogames brings you its rigour and its unique point of view by creating player, non-player, two-legged, four-legged, flying, scrawling and jumping characters!
Environments
Terrain, fog, atmospheric effects, ground, sky, water textures ... Frogames will create for your project all these elements to make your game universe homogeneous and maximize the player's immersion.
3D objects
You will need more than characters and environments to make your game.
Frogames helps you to fill your levels with creatures, buildings, vehicles, animated (or not) sets and much more...
UI and 2D
Frogames provides you know-how and creativity in realizing users' interfaces, menus, marketing portfolios, marketing video footage along with illustration for printing jacket, user's guides, maps and whatever else your game requires.
******
Good luck!!
01/26/2006 (10:15 am)
To add to Chris' edits:*****
Frogames gives you resources to speed up the production of your game. We create affordable content packs as well as provide 2-d and 3-d art creation. Frogames main focus is supporting Indie game developers.
We are well-known to be skilled, reactive, professional, with front-line development experience, providing an excellent quality-price ratio.
If you want to work with us or need a quote, please contact us.
Characters
Characters will be realized, optimized and animated with care.
Frogames brings you its rigour and its unique point of view by creating player, non-player, two-legged, four-legged, flying, scrawling and jumping characters!
Environments
Terrain, fog, atmospheric effects, ground, sky, water textures ... Frogames will create for your project all these elements to make your game universe homogeneous and maximize the player's immersion.
3D objects
You will need more than characters and environments to make your game.
Frogames helps you to fill your levels with creatures, buildings, vehicles, animated (or not) sets and much more...
UI and 2D
Frogames provides you know-how and creativity in realizing users' interfaces, menus, marketing portfolios, marketing video footage along with illustration for printing jacket, user's guides, maps and whatever else your game requires.
******
Good luck!!
#5
01/26/2006 (10:24 am)
Jameson - What did you change ?
#6
I love your style and work!
I eagerly await to purchase your first content pack!
Steve
01/26/2006 (10:40 am)
Christophe,I love your style and work!
I eagerly await to purchase your first content pack!
Steve
#7
You might also want to add some content in the left table on the interior pages.
Looks good :)
01/26/2006 (1:34 pm)
We hire someone to write our copy so I can't help you with that. However before you launch, make sure to validate http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http://www.frogames.net/You might also want to add some content in the left table on the interior pages.
Looks good :)
#8
We'll update the texts before the weekend.
@Chris - code validation will be done later, you can count on me for that ;)
01/26/2006 (2:18 pm)
Thanks for your help guys!We'll update the texts before the weekend.
@Chris - code validation will be done later, you can count on me for that ;)
#9
last news -> latest news
That, and the extensive list Chris posted, should have you better than most sites done by native speakers (unfortunately.) There are a few stylistic things I might change, mostly to reduce the repetition of a few phrases, but it probably isn't worth the effort.
Add me to the list of people who can't wait to buy your products.
01/26/2006 (2:51 pm)
On the front page:last news -> latest news
That, and the extensive list Chris posted, should have you better than most sites done by native speakers (unfortunately.) There are a few stylistic things I might change, mostly to reduce the repetition of a few phrases, but it probably isn't worth the effort.
Add me to the list of people who can't wait to buy your products.
Torque Owner Chris Labombard
Premium Preferred
You are looking to novel graphic elements to differentiate your project from the others : here we are!
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If you are looking for novel graphic elements to differentiate your project from others : here we are!
Also the little pictures on your packs with the green girl need to read video game ... not games.
on the products page:
A set of more than 50 elements to build your dungeons levels -> A set of more than 50 elements to build your dungeon levels
Also, the download sizes should read MB and not MO I think
Services page:
Frogames provides resources to speed up the production of your game. We offer affordable content packs and operate as external contractors for art creation. We mainly work for indie developers.
We are well-know for being skilled, reactive, professional, artists with front-line experience that provide an excellent quality-price ratio.
If you want to work with us or get a quote, please contact us.
Characters
Characters must be realized, optimized and animated with care. should realized be created?
Frogames brings you its rigour and unique point of view to create player, non player, two-legged, four-legged, flying, scrawling and jumping characters!
Environnments
Terrain, fog, atmospheric effects, ground, sky, water textures ... Frogames can create all of these elements for your project to make your game universe homogeneous and make the player's immersion possible.
3D objects
You will need more than characters and environnments to make your game.
Frogames help you to fill your levels with creatures, buildings, and vehicles, in animated or non-animated sets ...
UI and 2D
Frogames provide [b]their know-how and creativity in creating user interfaces, menus, marketing portfolios, marketing video footage and all sorts of illustrations (jacket, user's guides, maps