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Need Something to Do ver.2.0

by John Santiago · 02/21/2008 (5:32 pm) · 10 comments

ok, i think i got this right. These are a couple of sketches posted, please drop some feedback. I am currently doing a cover for indie comic, looking to get into games. If anyone intrested please drop me an email thanks. Looking to build my resume and take on as many projects as I can.

The scanner i was using is fubard but i hope to post more pictures/sketches thanks

www4.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/e9e40b07859a421b691be125cd7afa325g.jpgwww3.mediafire.com/imgbnc.php/c76d857a4df57c349167ee1b7908da105g.jpg

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#1
02/21/2008 (5:54 pm)
Possibly speaking for others, deviant art isn't the best place for strictly image hosting because if you don't have an account you can't always view someone's work. I can't see your images for that reason.

Artists always get lots of feedback here if they post images in the body of the blog here, though, so you should edit yours to do so :)
#2
02/21/2008 (6:23 pm)
thank you for the input, I am fairly new to blogging. let me try to edit this post
#3
02/21/2008 (6:40 pm)
Some thought's...

"Artist: Hi possible employer, come over to my house to watch my work and give me something to do.. Comment and Critique welcomed"

"Employer: Got free donuts? No? Aww in that case, no thank's."

now, what i would do is print up a huge portfolio and stalk them abit and burst into their important meeting of sort's with security in my back panting for air (ha ha! im to fast, and to eager to show my work) "Hey you! Employer! Check these out *spreads out shiny pictures all over and bumps a few coffee cups to the floor* Now what you think? i get work?" Alright *maybe* just maybe that scenario wouldnt pan out to good..

What i mean is, make it easy and painless to se your work for the world outside (we at GG.com are in that category) your home city (DeviantArt)..

People like easy, no let me rephrase that *love* easy, easy easy easy, fastfastfast, thats why there's so many McDonald's out there..

So, what might get you those good feedback might be with an own webpage where you put your work or even a Image hosting site. That makes it easy to view your shiny pictures, and we love easy.
Its not DeviantArt we disslike so your misstaken on that part (if im not misstaken on that part ;} Personally i love DeviantArt and simmilar sites.)

/Thought's off

Now on a more serious note, looking forward to se your work.. ;}

Edit: Oh, that was fast.. hehe. Nicely done!.. Going for colored versions?
#4
02/21/2008 (6:58 pm)
lol your right. i should i have a personal page. I did post the pictures in the blog, are they there dunno, i can see them
#5
02/21/2008 (7:03 pm)
yea i am saving for a graphic tablet, both are ideas for a paintings, heavy metal syle
#6
02/21/2008 (8:17 pm)
No one seems to have commented on your drawings yet, so I'll go ahead and do that.

I really like the face in the first sketch. Great, clean, strong lines. Great proportions and sense of scale. I'd love to see some more developed work.

Cheers,
Fredrik S
#7
02/22/2008 (1:20 am)
I guess your images are tagged as "adult content" [boobies] and that's why outsiders of dA can not see them. Only adult content can not be viewed without an dA account, other images can be viewed by everyone without logging in.

For testing, here is another picture from dA, without adult content:
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs5/i/2005/013/9/9/A_mecha_sketch_by_bmkorkut.jpg
anyone should be able to see it.

Nice anatomical expressions by the way.


-B
#8
02/22/2008 (5:04 am)
Your art is great. Why anyone would consider that deviant is beyond me. The face is pretty, the bone and muscle structure is correct, well done. Her breasts look a little fake. (as if she has implants) That's my only critique.
#9
02/22/2008 (9:30 am)
Very nice structure and line.
#10
02/22/2008 (10:48 am)
thank you for the feedback, this is the first time i have posted anything publicly, I will keep trying to get more out there and definitely follow through with getting a web page..Thyphoid Twitch. Thank you and i will get some stuff up iin color when i obtain a graphic tablet